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My Father He Is Joy
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Yesterday, 03:23 PM
Oh this is really good! The prose is excellent, it's very emotional, and feels true to life. All the characters feel distinct and unique, and the dialogue flows really well.

Looking forward to more, thank you for sharing!
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My Father He Is Joy - by MonochromeClown - Yesterday, 08:48 AM
RE: My Father He Is Joy - by Lilium Mortem - Yesterday, 03:23 PM
RE: My Father He Is Joy - by MonochromeClown - Yesterday, 03:25 PM

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